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The Rebellion ch 1

4 space pirate friends have crash landed a Frigate, and they are stranded on a planet. to make things worse, horrible human experiments escape, turning a horrible situation into a even worse one. what will happen to the space pirates, and how will they survive? I was eagerly heading down to the mess hall. I stopped dead in my tracks. I glared at my demented brother, Snake. He will do literally anything to get attention, and I mean anything. He hates my guts, but I have no clue why though. “What’s up midget?” he hissed at me. I hated that name! I was only eight foot two, which was small for a pirate. It gave him no right to

Painful encounters ch 4 by WritersStory, literature

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Painful encounters ch 4

I finally made it to the town. I spotted an orange sign. “The bounty store . . . ” I mumbled. I walked toward the building and stepped in. I spotted the same guy that ran me over like fricking bowling pins. I surveyed him. He wore a poncho that was worn, battered and sewn back together. He had two pouches on his hips, and he wore these huge boots. He had a ponytail, and his forearms looked like someone got cheap and put hams there instead. He wore a cowboy hat with ears similar to mine poking out of it. His hat was lined with metal darts. “Well, there ya go Stranger! Good hunting!” The Clakker said. Stranger turned a

Cold Winter ch 7 by WritersStory, literature

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Cold Winter ch 7

I groggily sat up. My head was throbbing. I stood up and looked at my pitiful form. My face wasn’t swollen like before, but it was more bruised. My arm was wrapped up in a bloody pair of pants, and my hair was a complete mess. All tangled and matted with dried blood. I carefully untied the pair of pants from around my arm, being careful to not unclog my cuts. I found my knife, and instead of using it again, I chucked it out the window. I’ll bury it later. I gathered up some clean clothes, and undergarments, and unburied the door. I peeked out, and inched towards the bathroom, which happened to be nearby my room, thank god. I care

cold winter ch 6 by WritersStory, literature

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cold winter ch 6

“Melania, please report to the principle’s office. Repeat, Melania report to the principles office.” My heart stopped and my mouth went dry. My dad must have been here, and that meant only trouble. I weakly stood up, and dragged my feet out of class, giving a look of grief towards Zim. I trudged down the hall, to the office. I opened the door, expecting the worse. He wasn’t there. I sighed a large breath of relief. a upset principle, art teacher, and a Snobby, bruised blonde, all better than John. I stepped in, and sat in the only chair, which was next to the blonde. I glared at her. “You two got into a fight.

Cold winter ch 5 by WritersStory, literature

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Cold winter ch 5

I plopped in my seat, soon Zim and Dib sat at the table. I sighed and I laid my head down. Oscar rubbed my cheek with his head, knowing I’m ready to cry. I lifted my head up and rubbed Oscar’s cheek. He closed his eyes and purred. “Are you a kitty cat now?” I whispered. He purred louder. I smiled and chuckled. The art teacher did a brief summery about yesterday, and passed our paintings out. I sat down and stared at it. I made the same shades, and I dipped my paint brush and started painting. I sat there, fiddling with a feather at a time, till each one looked decent. After a while, I stopped and leaned back and stare

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Cold Winter ch 4

I was finished with a long tiring day at school. I couldn’t go relax at home because my dad might beat me again. Why in the heck is he getting worse?! I sighed and climbed onto the bus and flomped in the back seat. I watched kids pour into the bus. I looked out the window and a dirty blonde boy had Zim held up by his neck and pressed against the school wall. I didn’t care that the boy was at least 6 inches taller than me, or more. I couldn’t stand it when others got bullied, like me my whole life. It could be the psychotic Dib. I shoved people out of the way, even knocking a boy off the school bus steps with Oscar clinging

Cold Winter ch 3 by WritersStory, literature

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Cold Winter ch 3

I had just exited the bathroom in my dry clothes. I swear Dib will wish he’s dead when I get done with him. I re-entered the cafeteria and no one was there. Fudge.... I turned around and nearly ran into the principle. “Hi, uh, were do I go for art?” he told me what number, and he pointed me in the direction. I ran down the hall as soon as he was out of hearing range, and I found the number. I entered. “Sorry for being late! I got my clothes wet and I had to change.” I explained. A pretty, and friendly woman walked up to me. She was wearing a blue and red tye dye shirt with jeans. “It’s okay. Plea

Cold Winter ch 2 by WritersStory, literature

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Cold Winter ch 2

awoke to knocking on my door. Oh great! “Time to go to school.” dad growled. I checked my clock. Yup. I looked at my bloody shirt. I certainly couldn’t go to school with this shirt. I changed and collected Oscar and my backpack. I opened my door slightly, he wasn’t there. I sighed and inched out, and I grabbed a oatmeal bar, and ate it quickly. I stepped outside with Oscar on my shoulder. I didn’t have to worry about him flying away, I raised him since he was a baby. He was bald, and featherless and he was ADORABLE! I fed him special food, and upgraded my cages till he got full grown. I taught him how to fly, a

Cold Winter ch 1 by WritersStory, literature

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Cold Winter ch 1

Life sucked. Here I was, moving once again, to a foreign town, with no one we know lives nearby. I don’t see why my dad thinks that ‘more money’ means ‘happier kid’. Sure, I get everything I want, but why does it even matter when I am stuck at home by myself? My mother died in a car accident, along with my 7 year old brother. I felt tears forming in my eyes. My mother, was the best mother anyone could have. She was always there, she never yelled, she would take of me, listen, and she loved me. My dad says he does, but he doesn’t act like it. Half the time he’s an empty shell, and all he does is work.

Painful Encounters ch 3 by WritersStory, literature

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Painful Encounters ch 3

ÿþI was sitting in a room which was soaked in blood. Like the typical Vykker experimentation rooms. I ran and huddled over in the corner, fearing the worst. I heard a loud creaking noise, and I began to shake uncontrollably. A towering Vykker walked in. "Come here!" it shrieked. I shook my head no. "COME HERE!" It screamed. I refused to budge. It dropped a medical bag I didn't notice until now. I began to shake even more. It pulled out the remote for my shock collar and waved it. I STILL didn't budge. "Fine! If you insist!" I screamed and I collapsed on the ground, shaking uncontrollably. My legs were kicking and I grew fa

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Painful Encounters Ch1 by WritersStory, literature

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I screamed from pain when the Vykker zapped me by my collar. Damn freaks. I've been through years and years of cruel torment and tests, so I automatically knew what they wanted me to do. I refused to budge, not wanting to get shaved, or be the subject of any of their painful 'experiments'. Two interns attached two metal clamps around my wrist tightly, making them ache. I struggled and I got zapped again. "Just sit in the chair!" shrieked a Vykker. "Just sit in the damn chair!" I barred my fangs and snapped at the Vykker. I startled him, and he pressed the shock button on the remote. I felt my body turn into a fallen jerking mess. My vision

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Mar 24, 2014

The Rebellion

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The Rebellion: horror-adventure summary: 4 space pirate friends have crash landed a Frigate, and they are stranded on a planet. to make things worse, horrible human experiments escape, turning a horrible situation into a even worse one. what will happen to the space pirates, and how will they survive? so, my new story!! :D

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Mar 21, 2014

wtf?!

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all you guys that read Painful encounters, take a look at this! https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10191228/1/Oddworld-The-Tales-of-Trick read the summary, and then mine! >:C don't that sound like a rip off?!

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Mar 19, 2014

hi ya'll! Cooltreeko is here!

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Hi, this is cooltreeko, I am  posting my stories on this account, instead of the other. :) here is the summaries for my stories that are posted so far Cold Winter: invader zim Fan fic What happens when a girl loses her mother and brother, and get's stuck with a dead beat dad? what happens when he gets even more abusive, and who's going to help her, and save her life from him and herself? Zimxoc ZaOCr Painful Encounters: Oddworld Stranger's Wrath fan fic A very dangerous experiment escapes from Vykkers lab, and ends up in Western Mudos. She then encounters stranger. What happens when she becomes a bounty hunter, and she has to compete with

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Happy Birthday!!

Many thanks for the fav. And a very warm welcome to dA!

Mar 23, 2014

thank you! ^w^ and no prob.

I'm actually

but I wanted to post my stories on a different account.

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If you ever want or need any hints or tips to help with writing, I'd be more than happy to help you out. c: I've managed to pick up a few tricks over the time I've been writing, and I'm improving each and every day doing so! XDDD

okay. :3 thank you.

I posted 3 so far.

and if you decide to read them, critiques plz. X3

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Alright. X3 Just so you know, sometimes it may seem like I'm a little harsh when I point things out that could be improved on, but I'm only trying to help. ;w; I love having people tell me what I did wrong or what I could have done better, because I see that as something better than those lame "I like this! Keep it up!" or some other lazy comment. >.> It just means that someone actually took the time to look through my story and saw potential in it. c:

I actually had that happen once. Someone reviewed my story and actually went through a a boring book to try and find ways to help me improve! 0.0